Per request, here is the cinquain version of a recent Tin House rejection:
Story
second-rate, failed
reached, darted extending
felt like pudding instead of mousse
sadly.
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Per request, here is the cinquain version of a recent Tin House rejection:
Story
second-rate, failed
reached, darted extending
felt like pudding instead of mousse
sadly.
Well done sir.
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Since you are so honest with your rejections Pete, I thought I would post one of mine. This one is from high school:
we go
off to Perkin’s
beautiful girl, nice hair
home before curfew…beauty says…
don’t touch
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