More rejection (bad) poetry.

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Per request, here is the cinquain version of a recent Tin House rejection:

Story

second-rate, failed

reached, darted extending

felt like pudding instead of mousse

sadly.

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2 thoughts on “More rejection (bad) poetry.”

  2. Since you are so honest with your rejections Pete, I thought I would post one of mine. This one is from high school:

    we go
    off to Perkin’s
    beautiful girl, nice hair
    home before curfew…beauty says…
    don’t touch

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