Just sold another freelance piece to Gripped (Canada’s climbing magazine) – with help from Jennie’s revision ideas (She said, “This draft is not your best. Make it funnier.”)
Now to edit the piece:
color = colour
theater = theatre
right? = eh?
beer = brew
3.28 feet = a meter
Note to self: “High sticking” and “Way over the blue line” are bad things.
Plus, “converting a powerplay” means finishing something off in the right way.